I have not really read the kroot, so cant really give any advice.
But with my "very" untrained eye its dont look bad, but is there not a shaman (5 officer), geting him up front will help a lot with the money-making, maby drop the armors and get him ??
Another note, starting with 2 swords is really expensive... swap them for a single club and use the free knife (do kroot get free combat knifes??), saving 32 credit and buy swords later.
sorry i cante more helpfull...