One thing I noticed also (and this may be cause you wanted to use the base)
but he's a sniper in a ghillie suit standing in open terrain. You should have some vegetation so that the back of him at least blends in a bit.
I feel bad because we are all kinda picking this apart. I really like the figure and I think it can be made better with some changes. I'm not trying to say anything is bad it just needs a little work.
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