"Proeliator per nullus preteritus" Fluff

Personally, I don't think this fluff is all that good...but I'm overly critical of everything I do! So feedback would be appreciated! =]

Some Pictures will follow asap!

Captain Gilbran Harker
Lieutenent Logar
Sergeant Tollen
Sergeant Lustig
Weapon Specialist "Arson" Sturm
Private Titus
Private Marx
Commisar Johan Malmsteen

Former members of the 25th Cadian regiment, Captain Harker and his squad once assisted the Inquisition in purging an Underhive of an extensive Khornate cult alongside a company of the Deathwatch Space Marines, albeit unwillingly. Due to their conduct during the purge, which was so exemplary, or so suspect depending on the reports you hear, the Inquisition decided to retain the Squad’s services, keeping them were they can be carefully observed. They now act as an unofficial strike team to be used on occasions where a full Regiment of Imperial Guard or Company of Astartes would be considered too politically volatile or simply too much of a risk considering the potential gains.
All trace of their former lives have been expunged from the Imperium's archives (excluding the dog tags each was allowed to retain) and shall be forever forgotten as "Proeliator per nullus preteritus" or "Warriors with no past"

Not good?!?! You ARE overly critical!!! That was a GREAT introduction man!

It captures a great feeling of a small, individualized force... as long as they do their job, they can be as 'individual' as they can! Warning... do NOT get too attached to the forms on your mind. Death Squads tend to make 'great' fighters change... ask 02laney about my personal favorite Captain!

The only thing I did not liked... it ended! I want MORE!!!

Thanks for sharing... and good luck in your incoming adventures!

Cheers man =] I've always been like it, always compare things to what other people have done & can't help but think my things suck XD

I've been writing some short stories on another site (Star Trek based), been thinking of doing a similar sort of thing for 40k at some point. I might do a bit of a background to the Squad at some point, when I'm feeling literary minded haha
If I manage it I'll add it onto this thread =]

If you can write really short spots (half a page) that make sense and are exciting... with your permission, I could add them to TLRB as 'fillers' of those nasty empty spaces.

Think about it...

I reckon I could do that & if they found there way in there, so long as I was credited, that would be amazing! =D
I'll see what I can come up with =]

Of course you will be credited... silly man.

haha awesome! I've actually got an idea knocking about, I'll work on that & post ehre when I'm done =]

This is good. I hated fluf but like fluffing (LOL) when we started Death Squads. Seriously, I did but after reading some of the crazy things that Mordheimer would write I saw what fun it was. My first ones were really but and the newer ones are not much better but they are longer. LOL.


Keep up the good work.

He likes long fluffs. I see this thread degenerating quickly into the dark corners of the heretic mind...

haha I may have to rename the thread to "Heretics welcome" then! XD

That is us 'heretics".

WOW... we ALREADY have a website!( link)

haha!